Goldilocks and the Three Bears My Spin.

Once upon a time there was a girl Named Rudy she lived on a Island called Rarotonga far away from New Zealand.She lived with her friends called La La,Ezra,Danielle,Monica,It was Rudy's best friends.Rudy she went to school called Pt England school.Rudy had a iPad because the teacher moan she was so kind then it was lunch time they went to get there lunch and eat.The bell rang everyone went on the field to play Rudy went to the toilet and came back on the field she saw Once upon a time there was a girl Named Rudy she lived on a Island called Rarotonga far away from New Zealand.She lived with her friends called La La,Ezra,Danielle,Monica,It was Rudy's best friends.Rudy she went to school called Pt England school.Rudy had a iPad because the teacher moan she was so kind then it was lunch time they went to get there lunch and eat.The bell rang everyone went on the field to play Rudy went to the toilet and came back on the field she saw the all the children was all eaten then she turned around and saw two dragons Rudy screamed loud she started to run to the teacher moan,The dragons were shooting fire at Rudy.Rudy Ran home and saw the car gone she walked inside the house there was no one there she walked out of the house and thinked she remember what her friend said to Rudy they said they are going to a party at her other friends house Danielle she was having a party  because she had never did a party for years.Rudy ran fast to Danielle's house as she was still arriving the two dragon followed Rudy,Rudy turned back when she was running the two dragon hide next to a tree.Rudy arrived at Danielle's house the dragon ran in front at her then Rudy stopped and full over down on a rock she broke her arm and started to cry she walked slow when she go there Rudy saw the dragon trying to eat them Rudy grabbed a knife and ran killed the two dragons.Then Rudy went to hug her friends because she really care about her friends they went to the hospital to take rudy. The hospital said it is okay then they walked home and Danielle cooked some fish and chips for them all Rudy's friends and her lived happy ever after.

Walt: to be able to write a using creative language
Walt: to be able to use an existing story and put our own spin on it