Showing posts with label literacy writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label literacy writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, 12 December 2017
Monday, 4 December 2017
( Hot summer on the way)
(Hot summer on the way)
The forecast it predicts all of New Zealand can expect warmer than average temperatures this summer.
The u will know if is going to be a hot day it is when the sun shines bright and u can see it.
It means the it is going to be a very hot day and the clouds will not be above in the sky
Nahea ,Thanks
SUPER MOON FOR MONDAY NIGHT
( Supermoon for Monday night)
Everyday day New zealand will always see the moon shining bright.
The moon in 2017 will be called (supermoon)
The name in 2016.
On monday the moon will be so big that u can see it from the sky above.
Earth is the closest to the sun we can easily see it on Earth.
From Nahea Thanks
Friday, 1 December 2017
Week 6 at School.
Recount Writing
Week 6 at School
Walt: organise our ideas into a series of paragraphs.
Helpful Vocab
Introduction: (2-3 sentences)Who? What? When? Where? What are you writing about?
Do Make it exciting for your audience to read!
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On wednesday the 23rd of November year 5’s went to kiwi kapers.
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Paragraph 1: (3-4 sentences)
What happened first?
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As year 5’s arrived at kiwi kapers we felt excited .year 5’s got out the bus and waited outside, Pt England school walked to kiwi kapers there other schools at kiwi kapers.year 5’s went Inside kiwi kapers and there was a lot of chairs inside kiwi kapers.
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Paragraph 2: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next?
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As year 5’s sat down we all felt excited as the lights got blurry we knew that the lights were going to turn. When the lights turned off all of year 5’s screamed and other schools screamed as well.The other schools were up top setting down and we were down bottom setting down.
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Paragraph 3: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next?
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When the show begin we all felt alright year 5’s were happy when we
watching.As the show was still going after that it started to finish, the last part was when the people were playing the instrument the flute,violin,and other instrument.
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Conclusion:: (2-3 sentences)
What did you enjoy? What did you learn? Who would you like to thank?
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I enjoy when the man had the hula hoop and he went in it and swinged i enjoyed it
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Your recount - in full sentences - start here:
On Wednesday the 23rd of November year 5’s went to Kiwi Kapers.As year 5’s arrived at kiwi kapers we felt excited .Year 5’s got out the bus and waited outside, Pt England school walked to kiwi kapers there other schools at kiwi kapers.year 5’s went Inside kiwi kapers and there was a lot of chairs inside kiwi kapers.
As year 5’s sat down we all felt excited as the lights got blurry we knew that the lights were going to turn. When the lights turned off all of year 5’s screamed and other schools screamed as well.The other schools were up top setting down and we were down bottom setting down.
When the show begin we all felt alright year 5’s were happy when we
Watching.As the show was still going after that it started to finish, the last part was when the people were playing the instrument the flute,violin,and other instrument.I enjoy when the man had the hula hoop and he went in it and swinged i enjoyed it.
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Friday, 1 September 2017
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