Introduction: (2-3 sentences)Who? What? When? Where? What are you writing about?
Do Make it exciting for your audience to read!
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On wednesday the 23rd of November year 5’s went to kiwi kapers.
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Paragraph 1: (3-4 sentences)
What happened first?
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As year 5’s arrived at kiwi kapers we felt excited .year 5’s got out the bus and waited outside, Pt England school walked to kiwi kapers there other schools at kiwi kapers.year 5’s went Inside kiwi kapers and there was a lot of chairs inside kiwi kapers.
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Paragraph 2: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next?
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As year 5’s sat down we all felt excited as the lights got blurry we knew that the lights were going to turn. When the lights turned off all of year 5’s screamed and other schools screamed as well.The other schools were up top setting down and we were down bottom setting down.
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Paragraph 3: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next?
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When the show begin we all felt alright year 5’s were happy when we
watching.As the show was still going after that it started to finish, the last part was when the people were playing the instrument the flute,violin,and other instrument.
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Conclusion:: (2-3 sentences)
What did you enjoy? What did you learn? Who would you like to thank?
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I enjoy when the man had the hula hoop and he went in it and swinged i enjoyed it
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