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Thursday 2 August 2018

Real Story of Goldilocks and the Three Bears



In a nice summer day the wind blowing and birds flying above in the shinny blue starry sky. There was a girl named Goldilocks her three bears was really sick so mum said that they were gonna make some cookies for three bears because mum said that three bears loved cookies like the chocolate and peanut cookies so they started to make cookies.

Goldilocks was so angry because she made a cookie but it failed she kept on trying it still did not work so mum made some for her to do the rest of the cookie.Goldilocks found a poison pill and grabbed it. Mum didn't know what was inside cause she went to go and get more flour.

Then she finished baking the cake mum grabbed my nice basket to put the cookies. I went off and Goldilocks went walking through the woods. Goldilocks was so scared because sometimes when you go to the woods or in the forest it will mostly be scary or creepy.

But goldilocks was so freaked out because she said that it was night time but for real it wasn't it was actually morning if it wasn't morning it will take for ages for Goldilocks to get to the three bears. Goldilocks went to go to three bears house before she left she brang the map to get to three bears house.

The three bears house is inside the woods where the wolf's live. Anyways she didn't tell me that she had a friend that is a wolf thought Goldilocks. Goldilocks arrived at the three bears house she was really hungry so Goldilocks knocked on the door the first time she could not hear anyone Goldilocks knocked on the door again she heard nothing so she pushed the door gently it was opened.

Goldilocks went inside and she knew that the Three bears went for a walk because that’s what they do when the eat porridge.She was really hungry so she went to the table sat down and there was Three bowls full of porridge, Goldilocks ate daddy bears Porridge, Goldilocks said ARR it is to hot she said loudly then Goldilocks ate Mama bear's porridge, Goldilocks said ‘yuck’ it is too cold. Then Goldilocks went to eat the baby bears porrige Goldilocks said umm not Too cold not to hot this one is just right.Then she went to go and sit down on the chair.Goldilocks went to go to three bears house before she left she brang the map to get to three bears house.

Three bears house is inside the woods where the wolf's live.Anyways she didn't tell me that she had a friend that is a wolf thought Goldilocks.goldilocks arrived at the three bears house she was really hungry so Goldilocks knock on the door the first time she could not hear anyone Goldilocks knocked the door again she heard nothing so she pushed the door gently it was opened.

Goldilocks went inside and she knew that the Three bears went for a walk because that’s what they do when the eat porridge.

She was really hungry so she went to the table sat down and saw some porridge there was Three bowls full of porridge,Goldilocks eat daddy bears food,Goldilocks said ho ho hot she said loudly then Goldilocks eat Mummy bears food Goldilocks said ‘yuck’ it is too cold.Then Goldilocks went to eat the tenny baby bears food Goldilocks said umm not Too cold not to hot this one is just right.Then she went to go and sit down on the chair.

She went to mummy’s bed owww to soft then she went to baby’s bed and said it is not to hard and not to soft so she went in baby’s bed and had a sleep.The Three bears got home and saw that the door was opened so the three bears went to the table to eat there food.Oh no said daddy in a growly voice someone has eaten my porridge then daddy said look there is cookies i wander who brang it.

The mummy went to go and check her porridge she said oh no some has been eating my porridge then baby’s said someone’s been eating my porridge in a baby voice. So mum grabbed the cookie and went to the living room to sit down.Then daddy saw his chair and said someone’s been sitting in my chair said daddy.Someone’s been sitting in my chair said mummy someone’s been sitting in my chair said baby bear oh no and it is broken.So the Three bears went up stair in the bedroom someone’s been sleeping in my bed said daddy bear.Someone’s been sleeping in my bed said mummy bear.Someone’s been sleeping in my bed.

Oh no and she’s still there so Goldilocks got up and ran out the the door and went back home.Then the Three bears went and ate the cookies oh no it tasted different to the other cookies eww yuck i think they am gonna fall so the Three bears fall down to the floor and i think they will get up.The end to Be Continued.

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Twisted Version

Similarities

It is kind of the same but the difference is that the original you have to try to open the door.But the twisted version when u open the door it just opens.

In the original it is about when Goldilocks go to the Three bears house and opens the door it don’t  open so they just try to open it

In the twisted version  it is about when Goldilocks arrives at the three bears house.Goldilocks try to opened the door but when the Three bears went and locked the door and off they went walking.

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