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Friday, 17 August 2018

Ned

Today Pt England students got to see Ned.The assembly was about kindness and that we need to be kind to everyone.Every person matters and things can be different.Ned is a friend that shows kindness to people. Ned went to a place called Nenya is is a place where people live.

The Weekends

In the weekends I  went to the mt smart stadium to watch the warriors game it was really fun.#
The game started at night time
around 8 or 9 o'clock.When I went to the mt smart stadium it was my first time there and my church
is next to it  so we can hear lot of shouting and lot screaming when
they play rugby.The warriors is my favorite team they always win or sometimes l
ose even though they lose they are still my favorite team.


I went to the game with my aunty and uncle

and cousins  we first went to the shops to buy ice blocks then later on we were still
hungry so we went to mcdonalds to eat and off we went to the mt smart stadium.As
we were going to the game
i was thinking in my head that my favorite team was the warriors i know they will
win that’s what i was thinking in my head.
We arrived at the mt smart stadium it was really big and it looks cool we
got out of the car and my uncle parked the car and we went inside the stadium it was really cool
there was a big field and lots and lots of chairs everywhere  and it looks really cool in the inside it looks
cool but in the outside it looks really big.


We went and sat down on the chairs we sat at the really far back and also
we came early the warriors team came and we saw them getting ready and warming
up me and me and my  cousins went down to the field where the warriors `team was.We actually ran to
them and introduced our names i said i was last so i went last my cousin said her name then the other
then it was my turn introduced my name and i did.
Then the Warriors team introduced their names one by one.Then later on it was time for the game to play they
were waiting for the other team to play against them than the
other team arrived at the mt smart stadium and they were the night storm and
then they started to play.

The game started and the warriors kicked the ball first then the started to play the game
the warriors got a lot of tries the wariors was the best when
they played the warriors were passing the ball really fast  and that

means they were sharing the ball which was good.But the other team was passing the ball
 but not that fast as the warriors we should like the warriors because all of the boys are really good they
could actually train someone like the  coach train the warriors the the warriors can train us.
Then the game finished the warriors won but the other team did not win.
So we all went back home and went to be to be continued.

Thursday, 2 August 2018

Real Story of Goldilocks and the Three Bears



In a nice summer day the wind blowing and birds flying above in the shinny blue starry sky. There was a girl named Goldilocks her three bears was really sick so mum said that they were gonna make some cookies for three bears because mum said that three bears loved cookies like the chocolate and peanut cookies so they started to make cookies.

Goldilocks was so angry because she made a cookie but it failed she kept on trying it still did not work so mum made some for her to do the rest of the cookie.Goldilocks found a poison pill and grabbed it. Mum didn't know what was inside cause she went to go and get more flour.

Then she finished baking the cake mum grabbed my nice basket to put the cookies. I went off and Goldilocks went walking through the woods. Goldilocks was so scared because sometimes when you go to the woods or in the forest it will mostly be scary or creepy.

But goldilocks was so freaked out because she said that it was night time but for real it wasn't it was actually morning if it wasn't morning it will take for ages for Goldilocks to get to the three bears. Goldilocks went to go to three bears house before she left she brang the map to get to three bears house.

The three bears house is inside the woods where the wolf's live. Anyways she didn't tell me that she had a friend that is a wolf thought Goldilocks. Goldilocks arrived at the three bears house she was really hungry so Goldilocks knocked on the door the first time she could not hear anyone Goldilocks knocked on the door again she heard nothing so she pushed the door gently it was opened.

Goldilocks went inside and she knew that the Three bears went for a walk because that’s what they do when the eat porridge.She was really hungry so she went to the table sat down and there was Three bowls full of porridge, Goldilocks ate daddy bears Porridge, Goldilocks said ARR it is to hot she said loudly then Goldilocks ate Mama bear's porridge, Goldilocks said ‘yuck’ it is too cold. Then Goldilocks went to eat the baby bears porrige Goldilocks said umm not Too cold not to hot this one is just right.Then she went to go and sit down on the chair.Goldilocks went to go to three bears house before she left she brang the map to get to three bears house.

Three bears house is inside the woods where the wolf's live.Anyways she didn't tell me that she had a friend that is a wolf thought Goldilocks.goldilocks arrived at the three bears house she was really hungry so Goldilocks knock on the door the first time she could not hear anyone Goldilocks knocked the door again she heard nothing so she pushed the door gently it was opened.

Goldilocks went inside and she knew that the Three bears went for a walk because that’s what they do when the eat porridge.

She was really hungry so she went to the table sat down and saw some porridge there was Three bowls full of porridge,Goldilocks eat daddy bears food,Goldilocks said ho ho hot she said loudly then Goldilocks eat Mummy bears food Goldilocks said ‘yuck’ it is too cold.Then Goldilocks went to eat the tenny baby bears food Goldilocks said umm not Too cold not to hot this one is just right.Then she went to go and sit down on the chair.

She went to mummy’s bed owww to soft then she went to baby’s bed and said it is not to hard and not to soft so she went in baby’s bed and had a sleep.The Three bears got home and saw that the door was opened so the three bears went to the table to eat there food.Oh no said daddy in a growly voice someone has eaten my porridge then daddy said look there is cookies i wander who brang it.

The mummy went to go and check her porridge she said oh no some has been eating my porridge then baby’s said someone’s been eating my porridge in a baby voice. So mum grabbed the cookie and went to the living room to sit down.Then daddy saw his chair and said someone’s been sitting in my chair said daddy.Someone’s been sitting in my chair said mummy someone’s been sitting in my chair said baby bear oh no and it is broken.So the Three bears went up stair in the bedroom someone’s been sleeping in my bed said daddy bear.Someone’s been sleeping in my bed said mummy bear.Someone’s been sleeping in my bed.

Oh no and she’s still there so Goldilocks got up and ran out the the door and went back home.Then the Three bears went and ate the cookies oh no it tasted different to the other cookies eww yuck i think they am gonna fall so the Three bears fall down to the floor and i think they will get up.The end to Be Continued.

Original
Version

Twisted Version

Similarities

It is kind of the same but the difference is that the original you have to try to open the door.But the twisted version when u open the door it just opens.

In the original it is about when Goldilocks go to the Three bears house and opens the door it don’t  open so they just try to open it

In the twisted version  it is about when Goldilocks arrives at the three bears house.Goldilocks try to opened the door but when the Three bears went and locked the door and off they went walking.

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